OTI:one poem and notes:7/18/17

Open To Interpretation

 

Know

 

So I'm a cat that chases the feather,

Or some labyrinth confounded mouse.

A dog looks for un-thrown bones forever,

A gullible claims love for Big Foot's blouse.

I know that, and I know you know that, too,

I know that you know that I know you know

We show we don't know what between me and you

Do know what we know we show we don't show.

Oh, I'm not sure you're sure you're sure you're sure

Where we are where we were we are where

I'm sure you're sure I'm not sure you're sure you're

Where we are sure we are not sure we're there!

Give me a daisy, I'll pluck its petals,

End these know don't know show no show nettles!

 

DolphinWords

 

Notes: well, today was yesterday again...slept 'till 4pm...was up to 4am finishing the episodes of The White Queen...tale followed very closely the account at wiki's War of the Roses take...and The White Queen stayed true to seeing through the eyes of the girls the travails of Kingships...Game of Thrones does this too...the women have the best parts!...during the night in my sleep interruptions, I'll consider a dream, check my email, facebook, and the news...review my posts, and if a line of a poem occurs to me, I must write it right then...so the iphone notepad saves me...I can do all this in a sleep blurry moment...then curl up...so the gestation of a poem can be very spread out...it's a very odd routine!...not recommended!...here one draft...don't know but all free verse poems are drafts for rhyme metered poems!

draft

So I'm a cat that chases the feather

Or some labyrinth confounded mouse

A dog looking for an unthrown bone

A gullable in love with Big Foot.

I know that, and I know you know that.

I know that you know that I know that you know that I know...

we show we don't know

As though nothing happened

Ever you know we show as though

Something happened we show as though...

Oh, I'm not sure your sure.

And your sure your sure

I'm not sure and not sure

Your sure I'm sure...

Give me a daisy and I'll pluck its petals

Then we'll know we know we don't know we know we know...

Show we don't show we show

We do we don't we do...
 

:)

 

DavidDavid