OTI:one poem and notes:6/6/16

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Open To Interpretation

Bow Wow

I can't pick up after you
I got no patter
The girls all scatter
See you later
Loser
Next batter
It don't matter
If their fatter
If their badder
They all call me hater
Liar
Disloyal mother
Fucker
Just another taker
Trying to make her
I got no chance now
I'm like a dog behind the fence now
What did you say to them
To put all that hate in them?
There ain't no ray of hope now
Not a hell of a lot of room now
I'm a dog on a short chain now
Choke collar electric collar now
They took away my bark now
No bow wow now
I got no patter
These girls all scatter
It don't matter
I wanna be with you now
Make up this slack of you now
Be strong not weak for you now
Not some wtf to you now
I wanna get back our bow wow wow.

DolphinWords

Notes:  left off last night watching a youtube rap critics take on the 9 Worst Rap Songs of 2015...a delve to understand...someday, song and literature history anthologies will have to include the era 'rap', much as they do now the era of the beat poets...beat poets weren't shy about using profanities, kind of their vanity!...rappers too the same...the rhymes become a game...and there's only so many four letter words and sorts, so there's a kind of replica composite look to any one rap/song...the rhymes, the sentiments, commonly shared...one of the nine was about a fellow who lost his skills, his attractiveness, and I think I may have plagiarized...I could check..brb...
see Number Six of 9 Worst Rap Songs of 2015 by the Rap Critic...don't know but by happy happenstance I happened on the Rap Critic!...surely in Bow Wow, much is derivative, which is very much how songs are made...they have no hesitation to gather in hackneyed phrases and old chestnut sentiments!...Bow Wow took off with 'no patter'...rhymes and sentiment just tumbled out...I could 'rap' it up a notch, just by changing one word, which gives a hilarious sentiment to second 'scatter'...but then this post would be rated triple P!...I post it in deference to those out their listening to and making rap...having done one, I may well tumble into more...it's hard to stop them once they start!...and I'll add the Rap Critic to my MidnightMovies!...I wonder if Bow Wow for a rapper name is taken...brb...yep, and a successful one too!...my apologies to Maya, my dog!

oh, it needs a refrain...
I wanna get back our bow wow wow
I wanna get out and bow wow wow

and some drums and horns!

and of course, there's a group called Bow Wow Wow...
ral

:)

DavidDavid